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I just posted my newest Supergirl fan fiction story (#61), "Team Super Vs. The Ultimate Chemical Weapon" on my Facebook page. This one was also the result of a suggestion from a regular reader. Hope you like it!

https://www.facebook.com/stewart.tick/posts/1134921913305840
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Well Professor Tick, you have done it again. The reveal of Kara to Lena was nice and I hope if anyone on the set checks out this forum will get a rough idea as to hand this should the moment arise. And suddenly, a brainstorm comes into my mind. With your permission...I am including some things to this which you will note in brackets.

Scene Seven

It is now about 11 AM the next day (Thursday). Lena is in her office at the LexCorp building when Kara knocks on the door. Lena lets her in…

Lena (clearly surprised and relieved): Kara! I’m so glad to see you’re OK! I guess you probably heard what happened in Crystal Beach yesterday! Where have you been – doing undercover reporter work?

Kara (smiling): No, I was there the whole time!

Lena (looking confused and at a loss for words): What do you mean?

Kara: So I hear you’re an unofficial member of the Supergirl Team now!

Lena: Yes, that’s what Alex said!

Kara: How would you like to become an official member?

Lena (smiling): Oh, that would be great! … What do I have to do?

Kara (grinning, [then winking]): Just watch!

Kara tears her shirt open and changes to Supergirl in front of Lena…

[Kara (dressed as Supergirl in the power pose)..well, what do you think?]

Lena (taken aback and momentarily speechless): Wow!....
It never occurred to me…..Now it all makes sense… Alex started to call you Kara yesterday when you were being held hostage. And I never saw you and Supergirl… I mean, in your secret identity… Uhh, I don’t really know how to put it…

Kara (smiling): I know exactly what you mean, Lena!

Lean (smiling): So now I’m a member of the Supergirl Team?

Kara: Yes, an official member! So now you need to know our motto – “Hope, Help, and Compassion for All! And also our slogan – “El Mayarah”! That’s Kryptonian – it means “Stronger Together”!

Lena: Well, I’ll drink to that! In fact, why don’t we do it together?

Lena pulls a bottle of wine and two glasses out of her bottom right-hand desk drawer. [But then Supergirl stops her]

[Kara: Miss Luthor, uh Lena, i don't drink when I fly]

[Lena: Fortunately I came prepared for this. Besides I should drink less anyway]

[Lena puts back the wine bottle and glasses, goes to a small refrigerator in the corner of her office, and pulls out...a bottle of lemon flavored sparkling water along with two drinking glasses. She goes to an ice bucket on her desk and puts out two big ice cubes in the glasses.]

She fills the two glasses, and offers a toast.

[Lena: To us?]

[Kara: To us]

Lena and Kara clink their glasses together and both then take a sip.

[The two then wink at each other, sealing their friendship].
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Great story. Loved the Lena reveal. I hope the show follows suit in the same positive way.

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Thanks, Robert!

I do like your additions to my last scene - and I really do hope that it plays out something like that on the show. I really want Kara and Lena to be "best buddies", as they were in the original Silver Age comics - back when Lena's last name was "Thorul" (an anagram of "Luthor";).

Here they are in Action Comics #313:

https://flic.kr/p/KSk8pT
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Thanks, Robert!

I do like your additions to my last scene - and I really do hope that it plays out something like that on the show. I really want Kara and Lena to be "best buddies", as they were in the original Silver Age comics - back when Lena's last name was "Thorul" (an anagram of "Luthor";).

Here they are in Action Comics #313:

https://flic.kr/p/KSk8pT


Hey, you are more than welcome, Stewart.
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The comics panel is from the new Supergirl Annual that was released on Wednesday. I have never had Jeremiah in any of my fan fiction stories yet. In fact, I don't think I've ever even mentioned him....

Here's a link to the Supergirl Annual on Comixology:

https://www.comixology.com/Supergirl-2016-Annual-1/digital-comic/540277?ref=c2VhcmNoL2luZGV4L2Rlc2t0b3Avc2xpZGVyTGlzdC90b3BSZXN1bHRzU2xpZGVy
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